Audience feedback

Below is some audience feedback from the first rough cut and also the second brought cut. I asked two friends aged 18 to watch and give me feedback on how to improve and what they liked about the music video.

Here Josh and Sophie are talking about how they like the music video. Later on i asked them if they thought anything could be improved. Josh mentioned that the shot of the female walking into the lake could be shorter and that it lasts a long time. However, they both enjoyed the shot of the female turing in slow motion (slow motion recap done on premier). 

This is the second audience feedback that i was given from them today. Here, they are watching the second rough cut. Both of these rough cuts don't involve much editing; but mainly just clips put together. There has been no colour balancing; however, i have overplayed one of the shots of the church onto a close rotating shot of the female. This is as much editing of the clips that i have don't so far. 

Overall the feedback from these two people isn't specifically in the detail that i wanted; however, form this i am going to shorten some clips and edit the footage more. The audience feedback here is from my secondary audience and therefore, i will be getting more feedback from by primary audience (men ages 28-40) in the future once i have added some colour balance and editing.