Feedback three

This is my third piece of feedback. Here I am receiving feedback from a two men aged 46 years of age. I have also got feedback from 2 women, aged 48 and 37. The men are my primary target audience due to Garbage's prime time was in the 1980's when these participants were 20 years of age. 
 The feedback given was mainly positive; however, some of the shots of the music video were stated as being too long therefore, I will be shortening these down and filling the gaps in with other footage that I have got from the shooting days that I have not used yet. Also some constructive criticism was that instead of some of the shots going from light to dark t hen light back to dark at the end, the continuity and the narrative would be clearer if the beginning of the music video was in day light and then towards the end it stayed dark. Also the transition between the light day time and dark night time may need to be smoother and more continuous. 
 However, the story line was clear and they enjoyed the overall shots and they mentioned that it looked like a professional music video. One of the 46 year old men has been in band over the last 20 years and he edits his music videos; he stated that from his experience that my music looked more professional than many unprofessional music videos he has ever seen.